[sub]Got busy, lost my notes, blah, blah, blah[/sub]
My expectations have always been so high for the series that I’ve not given it a chance to stand apart from my desires. I liked the episode, but still thought it lacked depth. It seemed to be more about showing off TOS elements than a coherent storyline.
They shoe-horned in the Gorn. While humans go from sumo wrestlers to pygmies and giant swedes to diminutive asians, the Gorn’s reinvention seemed unjustified; too great a disparity in the species. But I’m not an exobiologist.
I still say that the dead crew strewn about the halls should have long been removed or should be decomposing.
I liked the use of the grav-plating, but it points out 1) why didn’t anyone else do that, and 2) if your technology has grav-plating I would think you would have technology more advanced than phasers that you could doge awawy from.
I can accept that the Ent-crew in spacesuits had to get some other clothes, but would you feel comfortable changing from militaristic clothing to pajamas? I’d at lesat take a flak-jacket off the pion guards. (And Reed really shouldn’t have worn that red shirt; you know what happens to red-shirts)
What always strikes me as pandering is that the crew instantly know what to do. The Defiant is 100 years ahead in technology, but they grasp the idea of (and to to deploy) shields. They can use the scanners and the helm. They can reroute power and everything else. Have some dialogue where we see people stumble, swear, get angry, give up, etc., so long as we see their personalities.
I’m flabergasted that they let Phlox go through his entire espionage scene without uttering, “Dammit, I’m a doctor, not a spy” (engineer/mechanic/whatever)
I liked how Archer was so callous and stepped over the dead and dying as if they didn’t exist.
I would have liked to see glimmers of Hoshi in conversation with others that foreshadowed her killing Archer and taking over. Something like whispering to Reed, “Do you think the captain can really do it?” Reed: “Of course!” Sato: nods sagely as she mentally marks him off the list of people she can trust. In hindsight, I saw some foreshadowing as the camera zoomed in on Hoshi pouring some green ale and at the end we see she poisons Archer. The catfight didn’t make sense because T’Pol should have taken her, but it did show her ruthlessness, which panned out in the end.
The ending left me wanting to know what happenned later. Some political and military intrigue as she tries to take power. What if she contacts some other concubines and has them wield influence (and death) to help Empress Sato?